Davis and her family stayed at a hotel the night before and left the next morning to board the ship. They got to their cabin, explored the ship, and watched the shows that night. Their next day was at sea and that's when they tried all the different cuisines and foods the ship had to offer. The third day Davis and her family arrived at the first port which was Cozumel, Mexico. They took a taxi to one of the smaller beaches called Playa Palancab and spent the day there. They visited Belize on the fourth day, where they toured the city and did some shopping. Their third port, on the fifth day, was Mahogany Bay, Roatan. There they spent the day at the beach and did some more shopping. On the sixth day they visited their fourth port, the Grand Cayman Islands. There they went swimming with stingrays and did some snorkeling! Davis and her family spent the last day at sea and enjoyed all the ship's activities and amenities before they had to go home the next morning. They safely arrived back in Tampa on Jul. 20 and drove home. "I visited some of the most beautiful places I've ever been to this week and I wish it didn't go by so fast." says Davis, as she reminisced on her cruise with hopes to visit the Western Caribbean again.
You need to try your best to keep the readers attention. Honestly I was lost 1/3 of the way down. Your story isn't very concise. But good structure, and beautiful picture
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